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choonland
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 Posted - 2009/03/13 : 05:01:10
so I was working in this track using a sample from the movie "Jerry mcguire"...
I tried to get it signed but.. uhhh... it wasn't 
it still needs a little work here and there, but the truth is that I am sick of it, and I'm too lazy to finish it, so I thought "what the fluk, lets give that thing away!"
so here:
http://koti.mbnet.fi/natura/Naturatech%20-%20show%20me%20the%20money.mp3
tough love feedback wanted, please
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Edited by - choonland on 2009/04/17 22:42:15 |
choonland
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Posted - 2009/03/13 : 21:23:50
no comments at all?
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whispering
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Posted - 2009/03/13 : 21:30:25
Damn, this slipped off my radar compleatly. Listening now...
First impression: make it nastier and youve got yourself an ace frenchcore tune :p
Loving how the vocal sample is remixed in there.
Melody is awesome as always.
Think the bass/kick is the weak part, doesnt really support the rest. But then again i'm not a producer, so thats compleatly from a music listeners perspective.
Overall; digging it :)
Edit: ...and the "choir" part works great.
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Edited by - whispering on 2009/03/13 21:38:48 |
whispering
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Posted - 2009/03/14 : 13:56:29
Ok after listening this a couple of dozen times, i can say the track is awesome, and the problem i had with bassline/kick isnt really a problem with them. Its the "volume". This is definately a more "hardcore" track from you, so after the breakdown ( in ~2:15) when the kick comes back in, it doesnt have any "balls", it could be a bit more "rough" or louder IMO. But this is easily one of the best ive heard from you (Without Loop is still my favourite though :p).
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choonland
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Posted - 2009/03/14 : 14:53:58
lol, thanks for taking so much time listening, thats great feedback there!
I'm not touching this track for a while.. I kind of wanna rest from it, but when I do, I will definitely have in mind your comments :)
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tru bass
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Posted - 2009/03/14 : 15:11:49
its a bit hectic for me..
that sample of the woman is really overpowering and annoying when played in a loop.
overall its good. not my sort of thing though
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whispering
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Posted - 2009/03/14 : 16:27:15
I got it, ive been listening frenchcore a lot lately, and if you listen that tunes intro:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pOPQMW7epAk
In that tunes beginning at 0:15 when the bass kicks in, it really kicks in. So when i was listening your tune, i expected a similar effect after the breakdown (at 2:15), so it was kinda a let down when it didnt come as hard as i wanted :)
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Originally posted by tru bass:
that sample of the woman is really overpowering and annoying when played in a loop.
I thought it was one of the best parts on the tune, heh.
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Edited by - whispering on 2009/03/14 16:28:27 |
choonland
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Posted - 2009/03/14 : 20:47:25
quote:
Originally posted by whispering:
I got it, ive been listening frenchcore a lot lately, and if you listen that tunes intro:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pOPQMW7epAk
In that tunes beginning at 0:15 when the bass kicks in, it really kicks in. So when i was listening your tune, i expected a similar effect after the breakdown (at 2:15), so it was kinda a let down when it didnt come as hard as i wanted :)
I see what you mean, and btw, i've heard about frenchcore...but I'm liking it :)
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Edited by - choonland on 2009/03/14 20:48:05 |
Triquatra
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Posted - 2009/03/16 : 10:51:05
agree with whispering :) great track though!
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Audio Warfare
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Posted - 2009/03/16 : 21:11:21
Nice, thanks for this. Have to agree with everyone else but nice anyways. ;)
Oh to snare/clap sounds more suited to a Happy Hardcore track too. Definitely needs hardening up. :)
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