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        | atomsk Advanced Member
 
      
  
    United States
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 |  Posted - 2009/02/25 :  18:56:18     not sure if anyone here has heard some terrorcore song, but i like them so i got really really bored today after a good slasher and made this.....
 i am a noob at this so dont kill me, this is my 3rd song i have done ever
 my mastering and compression suck, cuz of the bass
 i hope it sounds good-ish on your speakers (only have headphones atm)
 the start is kinda load so dont get to loud
 constitutive chritsam(cant spell) plz
 thanks
 
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 btw the bpm is 215
   
 edit: i put this in the wrong dicussion, mods plz move
 
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 Edited by - atomsk on 2009/02/25  19:04:35
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        | choonland Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/02/25 :  19:10:09       cool, its the first time i see a terrorcore track posted here
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 sounds decent to me, the atmosphere in the breakdown sounds interesting, has that darkish and tetric feeling.
 ... mmm I dont know so much about terror so i dont know what else to say
 maybe add more screams and crazy noizes?
 
 
 
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        | atomsk Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/02/25 :  20:18:54       thanks ^_^
 
 i think i will work on a long and better sound verson of this song tho
 
 i have more screams from a movie soo i think ill try a version 2 =]
 
 
 
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        | Jay-Owen Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/02/25 :  20:34:38       It needs work, but considering that this is only your 3rd, I'd say ****ing nice job. Keep it going!
 
 
 
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        | atomsk Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/02/25 :  20:35:31       
 quote:Originally posted by Jay-Owen:
 It needs work, but considering that this is only your 3rd, I'd say ****ing nice job. Keep it going!
 
 
 
 thank you
 what do you think would make it better?
 
 
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        | atomsk Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/02/25 :  21:59:53       anymore constitutive chritsam?
 
 
 
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        | Project-Industrial Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/02/25 :  22:07:37       its criticism to help you wif your spelling :)
 
 anyway.. sounds well good fella ;)  as already said might add some more 'help im beeing brutally raped' screaming in over the first 30 seconds till the melody comes then fade the screams out or so :)
 
 as for how it ends atm.. i would leave it like this.. then go for a full blast melody + kicks (the ones u used before) just like that.. no intro on it or w/e :)
 
 a well.. enjoy!! post a full scale version once ya done (if ya like)
 
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        | atomsk Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/02/25 :  23:05:03       lol i know my spelling is atrocious sorry xD
 
 i do have a really fu** up screaming scene from the same movie, it was epic
 
 yes ill post a longer, better mixed version soon... not sure when been haveing music block >_<
 
 spelling
 
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     Edited by - atomsk on 2009/02/25  23:05:42
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        | acidfluxxbass Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/02/26 :  00:31:30       
 quote:[b]better mixed version soon
 
 
 
 
 :| ?
 
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        | atomsk Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/02/26 :  00:40:59       
 quote:Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
 
 quote:[b]better mixed version soon
 
 
 
 
 :| ?
 
 
 
 huh?
 
 i mean the bass fu**s up the song kinda
 thats what i ment by "better mixed"
 idk xD
 
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 |  Posted - 2009/02/26 :  01:32:27       hate writers blocks xD try listening to some hardcore radio or so.. well terror in ur case :p might give ya some ideas =]
 
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