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        | ozmium Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/03/14 :  02:27:36       http://www.looperman.com/player.php?tid=26287
 
 
 my newest track for the week
 
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 dl link
 
 http://www.looperman.com/includes/tng/pub/tNG_download4.php?mod=tracks&mid=219609&KT_download1=e9f2e4a7dcefe0386dd55f873dda2d81
 
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        | ozmium Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/03/14 :  02:38:03       if you have a looperman can u review it for me thatd be cool if you dont u can review it in this thread try not to be harsh
 
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        | Kosmic Average Member
 
    
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/03/23 :  00:53:43       mate im no producer but fix that drum kit and ur on to sumthing!
 
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        | acidfluxxbass Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/03/23 :  01:42:19       the drum loop is actually surprisingly catchy, but should be worked around a solid 4/4 kick.
 it shows good potential though :)
 though it needs the touch of an experienced producer to make the most of that potential.
 
 keep at it. oh and master ¦}
 
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        | choonland Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/03/23 :  03:14:17       you need some good kick sample, i can barely hear it
 
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        | atomsk Advanced Member
 
      
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/03/26 :  06:26:09       i like it some, it needs way better drums, and at like @1:42 (i think) a bass comes in (i think) and it seems out of place needs to be harder or grittyer imo
 need new drum samples fo sho
 
 
 
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     Edited by - atomsk on 2009/03/26  06:26:35
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