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Yateszi
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 Posted - 2009/04/28 : 21:42:22
Hey.
I had a crack at producing a song, check it out - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p78KN6_s7aU. (UPDATED - 29 April)
Took me about 10 hours to make, so what do yall think?
If anyone likes it I can supply a download link for the MP3. 
Edit: Here's the download - DOWNLOAD(UPDATED - 29 April)
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Fishy
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Posted - 2009/04/28 : 21:52:35
Pretty damn good for a first time even tho its not really my style at all, but come on Ready 2 Go, can u get a more unorignal name?:P
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Mortis
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Posted - 2009/04/28 : 21:54:38
I don't think for one minute that that's your first ever track.
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tru bass
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Posted - 2009/04/28 : 22:05:19
yeah im with mortis, maybe your first track posted on a website.
but i like it..
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Yateszi
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Posted - 2009/04/28 : 22:08:55
Wow wasn't expecting good feedback. :O
Ok.. not the first, but since the other one was rubbish I won't count that. Can anyone think of ways I can improve it, or is it really that good?
Cheers.
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tru bass
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Posted - 2009/04/28 : 22:15:52
i think you need to get your beat sounding as good as you can possibly get it, so i suggest making the hat more agressive and possibly making the clap gated and less well, clappy lol
i like the first section, maybe get a big creschendo thing leading up to where you drop the long strings, i would put a little bassline in with the strings as well, like a long deep one. the rest of that breakdown is really good imo. the tune is really nice as well..
thats about it.. i really cant think of anything other than that.
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2009/04/28 : 22:33:26
obviosly you've been on fruity for some time. its an okay tune. well made and stuff, and kinda catchy. wouldnt mind a 320 version
not your first track.. lets be honest, there are countless projects you have stored away ;)
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Triquatra
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Posted - 2009/04/28 : 22:48:46
i enjoyed the melody and the synths...ive been caining bonkers 7 in my mp3 player for the past two weeks...the synths reflect the style of hardcore that B7 was promoting :D two thumbs fresh!
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DJ-Hutchy
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Posted - 2009/04/29 : 09:10:13
Not a ****in chance that that is your 1st/2nd track m8... Its to well structured and a bit complex for a 2nd tune...And in 10 hours...
It is good tho... Like sum1 else said that you have probley gt loads ov projects stored away...
But it might be that this is your first track ov many that u know sounds alright...
Anyways good track m8, keep it up!!!
Would love to hear your 3rd track
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Yateszi
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Posted - 2009/04/29 : 17:51:13
cheers for the positive feedback.
I made some minor changes to the song, and updated the video and download links.
I sent the file off to that new record label someone posted about in this forum. http://www.happyhardcore.com/forums/topic.asp?topic_id=44759
What chance have I got of getting this signed? Still awaiting their reply.
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